Sledding at the Cottage

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I just finished putting on all of my winter clothes I would need for the snowy outdoors. I headed outside in a hurry and felt the cold, crisp, air on my face which was half covered up with a facemask, hat, and goggles. My cousin, sister, and I grabbed all of the snowboards and sleds we would need and headed off to the hill. After a long tread to the top, I was first to leave sled prints in the snow. My cousin attempted to snowboard but she fell when she hit a bump and got freezing snow down her coat. When we all reached the top again my sister had an idea. We would go on a train holding on to each others handles on the sleds and snowboards. We were all set to go and my cousin started pushing off. We had a slow start but sped off faster than a shot being fired. Half way down I started loosing balance and fell off the snowboard leaving my sister behind me covered in snow. Laughter filled the area as we decided to try it many more times. After many attempts we finally all made it down without falling. It was getting dark and as tired as we were from hiking up the hill, we decided to go inside. Hot chocolate was waiting at the table with tiny marshmellows, just the way we like it. What a fun day.